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It's not that bad

To all who work in here
And unemployment fear
It's not that bad
We all at least get paid
So don't be too dismayed
It's not that bad

And new jobs can be found
In numbers that astound
It's not that bad
So stop your griping moans
About your mortgage loans
It's not that bad

Sure all the bosses stink
It seems they never think
It's not that bad
But payday gets here soon
Then we are over Moon
It's not that bad

To escape misery
Just win the lottery
It's not that bad
If you've ten million quid
Who cares what you once did
It's not that bad!!!

Author notes

The National Anthem of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Island and various of her Colonies Dominions and former territories
Oh and Leichtenstein uses the same tune too.

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  • Poemdancer
    December 3, 2007

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    Good write, great rhyming scheme. I love your use of repetition. Keep up the fantastic writing, thanks for entering our contest!


  • B.bdawn
    November 14, 2007
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    good write here, good luck on the contest.


  • Barry Hodges silver member
    November 5, 2007

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    I fear that this is a bit near the mark. The Great British dream is to win the lottery and be able to buy the DVD set of "Big Brother".