She didn't want to be parted
not yet.
Darren split her like hot butter
brushed salt
from unsteady jawlines.
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temprano = early
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A contest entry
- The Look of Love by NurseChilly.
1000 points, ended November 10, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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hot buttered hips and lips...damn..
i can taste this... burnt toasted morning...
Stacy you done good girl.. yepp
many thanks for entering
G.x
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Thanks G.
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attraction, seems such a mysterious force... wonderful...PK
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Thanks PK.
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wonderfully succinct...
al
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Thanks Al.
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ooh
i like the darren series more and more
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Glad you do.
Thanks.
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well done
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Thank you.
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Another great poem in this series - loved the images you've planted in my mind with this one. You are soooo good at this, Stacy - powerful in its brevity!
~ Nicolette
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Thanks Nic.
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