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[ Tender moments spent in the embrace of another ]

Tender moments spent in the embrace of another
Memories and moments come and gone like
Those fleeting memories of times long ago.
When it didn't matter who you played with,
Or who you where related to.
The simplest touch hiding the deepest meaning
Ingrained in skin, muscle, and bone
Deep like the ocean fading into saturated shades
Of blue and green a reflection of the world around....


- A willow desperate reaches out to the water... the life...
Deep, beating, breathing life
Through veins like liquid fire
Leaving rejuvenation in its wake
Beauty from the ashes
A phoenix rising -

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  • Apsinthion
    November 2, 2007

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    very cool write!
    loved the flow and the depth of it
    thought-provoking and captivating

    ~rana~