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A grave Mistake

On this night I made a Grave mistake
I let a boy trick me so I would stay.
On this night I found his feelings were fake.

He hoped for something he wan't to take,
this I quickly found out was not okay.
On this night I made a grave mistake.

Hiw words pireced my heart like a stake.
As he forced me to do things his way.
On this night I found his feelings were fake.

Nothing I could do would stop this boys hate.
I fought and screamed till my lungs gave away.
On this night I made a huge mistake.

And when he was done, my sould he did take.
As I laid still crying tears of shame.
On this night I found his feelings were fake.

Now from this world I hide my face
because I was to weak to get away.
On that night I made a horrid mistake,
After that night I knew his feelings were fake.

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  • Kandy Floss
    November 7, 2007
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    omg how sad. i loved this poem!! is it true? dont u dare say that u are hiding because u were too weak to get away! it hapend to me before and hes the weak one! not you!! it tears u up inside but believe me you are the pne thats goin to come out on top! i hope everyone finds out what a prick that guy is!!!!!! hopw everything is ok and im here if u wana tok xxx