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Bruses

One Two.. There is a bruse

Three Four.. there is some more

Five Six... Beat with sticks

Seven Eight... tayed up late

Nine Ten... Cuz i was beat again

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  • dezney
    June 16
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    this was somewhat of an intresting poem


  • Darc Fragile Rose
    February 19, 2008
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    ...

    umm Baby this made me flinch badly


  • sidewinder silver member
    December 28, 2007

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    My friend you might do yourself a favor and do a spellcheck with this!

    tis sad that some suffer through anger within their lifetime just because someone can't look through their indifference!

    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill


  • unspokenlies
    November 25, 2007
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    o.O

    very interesting... a thinker v.v