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Gladness

 

 

 

 

I have spent my whole life looking for you

 

 

 

and now that I've found you I do not have

 

 

 

the strength to speak to you,

 

 

 

the beauty to look at you without shame,

 

 

 

or the grace to inspire you;

 

 

 

just let me lie here beside you, and cry

 

 

 

in tears of gladness, for you're here,

 

 

 

and my life will never be the same.

 

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 27

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    Ah..this is wonderful and truth is always warm and pleasuresome..very true and beautiful expression you wrote..thanks for sharing..

  • schellou
    September 19, 2008
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    Beautiful


  • Slick99
    September 15, 2008

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    Gladness

    this is awesome and beautiful!!! you should enter this in a contest!!! have a nice day, and keep up the good work!!! -slick99 .


  • JenP
    February 2, 2008

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    Beautiful! This picture goes along so well with the words you've written. Such gratefulness here. So gracious.


  • haikumonk gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    Sensitive effective write. Nicely penned from the first line right to the last. "strength, beauty and grace"...... and in life beyond the poem, I bet you have them all.

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  • rite
    November 4, 2007

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    Absolutely wonderful poetry! So often emotions are so overwhelming that we cannot find ways to express them in words. In rare instants we may find some to approximate to say what is deep inside of us. I believe you did just this in the poem on this page. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care,

    U

  • hose30
    November 2, 2007

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    O duana this so beautiful. i think this write had all the beauty as a song and the gift of a poet.Because you expressed yourself well. You words just flowed and connect like a piece of a puzzle.I think this write is so beautiful. I think you starting to express yourself more of what insides and it is showing beautifully.It pushed emotion out of me and I felt this in my heart.This was great. I have to take pointer from you now. This was raw and poignant. raw emotion. great job . I hope you win gold. have a great day.


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    November 1, 2007
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    EXCELLENT WRITE dUANA IV'E FELT THIS WAY MANY OF TIMES GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST CRAP DANG CAPS

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