Each man must fight
for his own existence,
knowing every action
will be misconstrued,
by someone, somewhere,
who will do him in,
and force upon him
the reputation of sin.
You are lucky if you
find in this world,
even one friend who
knows and understands
you.
Please tell me what you think
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this is good and i enjoyed this write alot.. good job with this ..
in line 7 you miss spelled upon.. you wrote upom=p
good luck in my contest and thank you for joining
Loves... -
A FRIEND THAT KNOWS WHO YOU TRUELY ARE
A CONNECTION, IS SUCH A GIFT.
THIS IS SO VERY BEAUTIFUL.
AND WE ALL CAN RELATE.
JUST LOVELY
GOD BLESS...
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this was a true and honest voiced poem
i like it alot
your a great poet
i like this poem written just the way it is
wonderful honesty
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You know at first I didn't understand the connection between th metaphoric title and the message within the poem, but at its conclusion understanding swam unto me in great swells. This was well written dear.
Keep penning!
~Mstrss"
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See this is what Im talking about , it is like these write are justing flowing.They are coming naturally. You are perfecting your feeling and this one also was perfect.My favorite lines were Every man must fight for his own existence, knowing every action will be misconstrued.Brillant. This is definitely true. Thought provoking as well as true. I think this is the essence of this world. But we have to find our way.Some people will not like our thoughts and way of life. But we must live this way sometime to prove a point.And also we have answer to god.Great write and I think this was better than any of my writes.
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Another good one good luck in the contest as well with this one
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Hi! Thank you for your great comments, and your encouragement! Duana
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