It's the little things
that cause the tears to fall
little movie clips
and the memories take hold
the pillow soaked
with melancholy cries...
and she says...
it's the little things
like the way he held my hand
or remembering...
the nights spent in the sand
Oh... the little things...
Words of love
and teasing little lines
a melody plays and
she can still taste the wine
sobbing softly
she rocks herself to sleep
and she says...
it's the little things
like the way we'd play our game
or imagining
the day I'd take his name
Oh.. the little things
and she says...
It's the little things
like his arms around my waist
and I can feel
the warmth of his embrace
if I had known
it was the last time...
Ooh the little things...
oOh the little things...
and she says...
it's the little things
like the way he held my hand
or remembering the nights spent in the sand
the way we'd play our little game
or imagining the day I'd take his name...
It's the little thing...
oOh the little things...
that
cause
the tears...
to...
f a l l...
Author notes
It's kinda got a slow tune to it.. I'll try and get it uploaded....
A contest entry
- sing to me by Behind-blue-eyes.
500 points, ended November 16, 2007, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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this is a great piece. there is a lot of truth in it. you are definitely right when you say that the little things really do make a big difference. i know from experience. i lost a great girlfriend because i was to caught up in myself to pay atteention to the little things. never stop writing
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you know this is a really great piece, when we in relationship, we always forgot how important these Little things are, just the other day i left my girl a love note on her pillow, the way she reacted to it it feels so good, it's like i left her a diamond ring, so thank you very much for the reminder. good luck in the contest.
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i love it
it describes all relationships
and what happens to many people
keep it up
xrosax
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