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We are meant to be



I knew from the first moment we met

that you belonged with me

we made it thru two wonderful years together

we could of made it through many more.



I try to tell myself I'm going to be ok

I try to think this is meant to be,

that I deserve better than you

but really baby, thats far from the truth.



I put a smile on my face

to make you think everything is perfectly ok

but if u look in my eyes

you could tell my heart is breaking and I need you.



Whe we talk, I cover up my loniness by laughing

but on the inside, I'm dying

my heart is slowly breaking

I can't go on like this anymore.



I still believe to this day

you belong with me

you are the only I ever loved

and the only one I'll ever love.



I could never give up on our love

I know it was meant to be

that's why this heart is slowly dying

that's why I'm not happy anymore.



When you were with me, you became a part of me

now that your gone I feel like a stranger

I don't even know who I am anymore

all I know is your the only one that makes me happy and loved

I'd do anything to get that back.



until the day I die

you know it in your heart too

I'll always love you

I'll always believe

WE ARE MEANT TO BE!!!

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angelbaby87
*one day you will wake up and realize she is perfect for you, and she will wake up next to the guy who already knew*

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  • infinitechaos07
    December 11, 2007
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    Good

    But you missed a few things... in the first stanza, of should be have, in the third stanza, When<<< you missed the N, fifth stanza, 3rd line, you missed a word, other than that it was good and I think we all can relate to these feelings.


  • Poetryistherapy
    November 6, 2007

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    This was everything that I was hoping to read in this contest. Thank you so much for entering and for following my rules...

    This was absolutely wonderful.
    <3


  • Angelic Princess21
    November 1, 2007

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    i really like this. i mean alot. i can relate to this poem and loving someone can hurt so deeply. thank you for sharing you did a great job.
    Angel