I knew from the first moment we met
that you belonged with me
we made it thru two wonderful years together
we could of made it through many more.
I try to tell myself I'm going to be ok
I try to think this is meant to be,
that I deserve better than you
but really baby, thats far from the truth.
I put a smile on my face
to make you think everything is perfectly ok
but if u look in my eyes
you could tell my heart is breaking and I need you.
Whe we talk, I cover up my loniness by laughing
but on the inside, I'm dying
my heart is slowly breaking
I can't go on like this anymore.
I still believe to this day
you belong with me
you are the only I ever loved
and the only one I'll ever love.
I could never give up on our love
I know it was meant to be
that's why this heart is slowly dying
that's why I'm not happy anymore.
When you were with me, you became a part of me
now that your gone I feel like a stranger
I don't even know who I am anymore
all I know is your the only one that makes me happy and loved
I'd do anything to get that back.
until the day I die
you know it in your heart too
I'll always love you
I'll always believe
WE ARE MEANT TO BE!!!
Author notes
angelbaby87
*one day you will wake up and realize she is perfect for you, and she will wake up next to the guy who already knew*
A contest entry
- I need a little {{happiness}} *options* *need more entries* by Poetryistherapy.
840 points, ended November 10, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Good
But you missed a few things... in the first stanza, of should be have, in the third stanza, When<<< you missed the N, fifth stanza, 3rd line, you missed a word, other than that it was good and I think we all can relate to these feelings.
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This was everything that I was hoping to read in this contest. Thank you so much for entering and for following my rules...
This was absolutely wonderful.
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i really like this. i mean alot. i can relate to this poem and loving someone can hurt so deeply. thank you for sharing you did a great job.
Angel



