I'll kiss you each morning
I'll kiss you each night
Remember for it is I
That wishes to hold you so tight.
I'll hold you in my arms
As the sun comes through
To the bodies of me and you
Know that I will always be true.
In the darkness of the night
May I be a passionate light
That warms your heart and soul
And lets your strongest feelings flow.
I'll kiss you like I did before
I'll hold you like there is nothing more
I'll remember you like you are my only
And I'll dream of you all the nights through.
Will you kiss me too
Will you hold me like I hold you
Will you remember me like I will remember you
And will you make all my dreams come true?
I'll wrap you in my warm embrace
Know that because of you
I am falling out of grace
And never will I let go of your sweet embrace.
Kiss me softly
And hold me tight
Set my soul on fire
And be my one desire.
Will you be beside me
When I awake in the morning
Will you lay down by me
When I fall asleep at night?
May I be the one
Who feels you up with such delight
Let me be there for you
Like I'd want you to be there for me.
Author notes
This poem is a 2 meaning poem. 1.) It's what I'd do and 2.) It's what I'm looking for the questions who I'm meant to be with can answer yes to.
A contest entry
- Love Me Till The End by Sorrow is the name.
400 points, ended January 8, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make Me Love You by xXCadyBabbiXx.
400 points, ended December 20, 2008, 12 entries
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Very Very Very Good Write
I ran out of words to describe this
and I probably could Put More Very's
But All Together a very strong Piece
Thank you and good luck
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One of The Best Ever...
Omg I did... yay I’m so happy right now ....right sorry I kind of got away from myself there... umm I never commented on this one and I’d just like to say that is defiantly one of your best ever... it comes strait from your heart and on to the paper, no filters, no blinds, just a strait shot.
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I can feel the passion flowing. You can make any woman want you when you write like this.
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AWWWWWW
I love this sooooo much.....this is truly wonderful...everything a woman could want in a man....Wow...I don't know what else to say...THANK YOU for showing this to me and sharing it with me...I especially loved this verse:
"In the darkness of the night
May I be a passionate light
That warms your heart and soul
And lets your strongest feelings flow."
This is so wonderfully sweet to me....you are a wonderful poet...Thank you again my friend
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You were right...made me cry. These are all the words I search for, but can never find. These are all the words I so long to say. This is that poem I was telling you that was only in my heart...
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It makes my heart lurch...because I've been looking for someone like this for so long...I was very much near tears of wanting when I read this
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This is romantic and says a lot about the man
that is both poet and a friend. I wish you all
the luck in the worlds, in finding the one that
will be your other half in this perfect fit of your
dreams.
Riftkin
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Very romantic dreamer, I love this it speaks volumes to me. I know of a special dream someone told me about and it is so similar to this...wow Amazing! love it! ~blessings always~
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awwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful my dear friend I understand this so well it still makes my heart skip a beat thinking of my love and me
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Very Nice
You write much like I do..romantic dreamers..hopelssly so, though I dont take hopeless to heart as I do so have so many right now, Like what youve done here and shared with me. Thankyou very much..
Evan
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SWEET
This is such a sweet, loving piece ...I enjoyed reading it ...thanks for entering!
Love, Raneika
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this made me cry...... i miss being able to say things like this and getting a positive response..... great write
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this is sweet..
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I like this. It has a flow of liquid love. It just down to earth emotions written from the heart. Simple and effective. Keep the ink flwoing.
~Donna~
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sweet. a nice read.
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Aww! This was so cute. Great job.
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Very sweet poem for a special someone. The flow was a little off at times; this could be fixed with a little play around (without changing meaning).
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BEAUTIFUL
This is a truly beautiful poem! I love the imagery it makes the poem so much more I can't pick a favorite line or stanza because I love all of them!!! I share the feelings in this poem! Great write!!!
Leslie -
Outstanding
This was an awesome poem. I don't know too much about the types, but this really resonated with me. -
I really like this poem. However I wasn't sure whether you intended it to be free verse or whether there was regular metre?!
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Love it
this is so beautiful.. nice pictures and ..well...really awesome
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i love it
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YAY
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
This is beautiful!!!!
Kiss me softly
And hold me tight
Set my soul on fire
And be my one desire.
Will you be beside me
When I awake in the morning
Will you lay down by me
When I fall asleep at night?
That's my favorite part.
~ Kerri
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