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[ Infinitesimal spec of insignificance ]

Infinitesimal spec of insignificance
In a space of all wreck in every sense
Unattainable want for something - real essence

Of something true scant in mere existence

Meaningless, seeming less
Than what could should would be
If maybe I could
Love

But really
Love

Something pure?
Something sure?
I'm really so insecure
Would you be willing?

But then it ends, and I'm left here on earth
Alone

so small

A spec, here
Shipwrecked, here
I thought you were where I belong
'Cause I know I don't belong, here
But I never new that one day

Gone

It would take infinity to fill this void
Why aren't you here to fill a corner?
There's so much out there to be filled
And I'm so small

Is my structure too complex to follow, or does it give a good impression of the "so small" feeling?

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