as I sit here I pray from tears and hope
I pray for best wishes but somehow I choke
I ask for dreams to be fulfilled and a extra hand
I can only do what I do best, I'm only a man
almost lost until a beam of light hit my window
I felt a summer breeze from the wind that blows
he answered gracefully and said no need to fear, let it go
A contest entry
- ~* Share Your Peace of Mind *~ by Desire.
525 points, ended November 4, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww....i love this poem
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Thank You!
Appreciate Your entry: pray for light
Powerful piece You penned and the images
of You asking for dreams to be fulfilled
bring forth tears
Love the words: beam of light...
Wonderful verse~~Love the rhyme!!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!

Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~


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hey
hello I just wanted to know what does a green trophy mean -
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and a green trophy means an Honorable Mention
Congratulations!!!
Thank You for a Wonderful entry
Love and Light~ Desire~*~
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awwwww this poem was beautiful. I liked it alot.
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My poem has nothing to do with yours, what are you talking about?
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whatever you think is right
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