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pray for light

as I sit here I pray from tears and hope
I pray for best wishes but somehow I choke
I ask for dreams to be fulfilled and a extra hand
I can only do what I do best, I'm only a man
almost lost until a beam of light hit my window
I felt a summer breeze from the wind that blows
he answered gracefully and said no need to fear, let it go

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  • my Aim - Tomboy chi
    November 23, 2007
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    aww....i love this poem


  • Desire gold member
    November 4, 2007
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    Thank You!

    Appreciate Your entry: pray for light

    Powerful piece You penned and the images
    of You asking for dreams to be fulfilled
    bring forth tears
    Love the words: beam of light...

    Wonderful verse~~Love the rhyme!!

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


    • Laconic
      November 5, 2007
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      hey

      hello I just wanted to know what does a green trophy mean

      • Desire gold member
        November 5, 2007
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        and a green trophy means an Honorable Mention
        Congratulations!!!
        Thank You for a Wonderful entry
        Love and Light~ Desire~*~


  • PoeticFlame
    November 1, 2007
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    awwwww this poem was beautiful. I liked it alot.


  • Oleander
    November 1, 2007
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    My poem has nothing to do with yours, what are you talking about?

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