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'Bout Shit

Silver seas capped with copper crowns
Stroll with an evening's  gown
Sand softly glowing as the sun goes down
Toes in the surf and the mind is far way
Surfing on a razor of a ray in remnants of day
Thinkin' 'bout shit in usual ways and the waves
Crashing all around is the only sound

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  • James R
    November 14, 2007
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    short seemed forced in in some places good piece though