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She Loved Him

She loved him,
with all her heart.
But all that happened
was that her world fell apart.

He was her knight in shining armor,
the prince that came to save her.
But instead of being her superman,
all he did was make her hurt.

She loved him,
with all her heart.
But all that happened
was that her world fell apart.

She thought that he'd finally be the one,
that would be there to hold her tight.
The one who would hold her close,
and say everything will be alright.

She loved him,
with all her heart.
But all that happened
was that her world fell apart.

She thought that love was finally on her side,
and that she's found what she was looking for.
Thought that she's be able to run into his arms,
when she could take nothing more.

She loved him,
with all her heart.
But all that happened
was that her world fell apart.

She thought all of those things,
but of course that wasn't the how it would end.
She's just look at her heart shattered on the floor,
look at how it had been broken...again.

She loved him,
with all her heart.
But all that happened
was that her world fell apart.

Author notes

First poem in like 2 months.

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  • Miss Insolence
    November 2, 2007

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    Considering that this is your first in 2 months, this is absolutely amazing. The flow is a little choppy in some parts, but other than that it's perfect.