Field days like roses
pleasing to make the blend
where I used to like a simple romance
well I don't think it will ever be the same again
I think if I just stay in the shadows
then I'll never see loves light
so when your thinking if it's real
Then you'll know I'm never right
picket fence of iron
my hearts all steel and cold
so when this distant mains our life
I'll feel conforming goals
I just ....
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You know, you can feel what love is now. Based on your your earlier story and my comment of it...you are truly an amazing writer and person. Keep fighting Blair.
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This is absolutly brilliant. I love you view on this. I love your style of writing and this is supurb
. You are trying to say that you hide from true love and if he thinks its real then hes wrong. I love your poetry! You are really talented.
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Hmm...I don't know why anyone won't comment on your poetry, Blair. It's really good and I think the flow, meaning and wording is just really good.
Keep up the great work, buddy. Lots of love! HAHA
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