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Past window

Centered left
the light stings

as it fades to shadow's wings

All framed
I sit this side of glass
and stare the shadows lost

this side of bright of sun

None too soon my eyes return
to study lines detailed, defined

drawn by hand
but first by mind

onto this land we think we own

Time crumbles all
time crumbles all

this too shall fall
to age
this cage we call our own

Past window glare of sun to left
not centered
balance thrown

for day will shadow more than this

and land
will steadily take its worth

no birth is new to this old world

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  • DeGraw
    July 10, 2008
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    Interesting!

    An interesting write to leave the reader to his own imagination!
    Regards,
    DeGraw