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Among the Stars

A shroud of mist

A vale of shadows

Coming forth

Against the tide

I lay broken

Amidst the flame

Falling,

Searching,

Fighting,

I find refuge

Among the stars...

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  • Hidded Within
    December 29, 2007
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    i dont know what to say. i rarely seem to come on anymore but i was looking at the comments on one of my poems and decided to see if you wrote anything new. how are you?

    this is a good poem like the ones i used to read by you. sure i may not comment but i still read lol very nice. i hope to hear from you my friend. take care.

    -Tworky