I hate
The way you fucked my mind
The scars you've left behind,
The nights you could'nt get your fix
The times you played your dirty tricks
I hate
The way you looked at me
The abuse, it's made me angry,
The lies you told my teacher
The times I felt just like a creature.
I hate
The deception of love you gave
The feeling of ending it within a grave,
The guilt you put upon my soul
The lack of self-control.
These emotions are gone I've had to smother.
How could you call yourself a mom
When you couldn't even be my mother?
Steven L'Ecuyer
A contest entry
- EDIT: ADDING POINTS! Come Be A Voice...Hearts Loving and True, Sincere...Lets Speak Out On Abuse..And start DOING instead of just watching... by PassionsPromise.
2500 points, ended December 10, 2007, 32 entries
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That was so pretty.
It really grabed my heart and pulled.
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I'm sorry you went through this in your childhood. I like the poem a lot. It has soul and personality to it and it's just a letter. Very blunt.
But for my contest I didn't want blunt..I wanted long and detailed. I think if you had gone into more detail I would have cried. Other than that it is a good one. Keep it up. -
What a sad memory about your teacher.
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Power packed my friend. My heart tore with this one. Thanks for sharing this with us here and please do let me know if i can use this in my book.
Aprpeciate your entry
Blessing
Tory
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More than welcome to use it in the book. Best of luck, and good health to you.
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Please add in your authors note if Tory can use this in her book...Scott & Tory
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Everything has been over for a few years now. My mother is on the road to recovery and she has been sober for 2 and a half years. Ever since I left my house she's been trying to show her apologies. I'm visiting her for thanksgiving, it'll be the first time I've seen her since 3 years ago.
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I am wishing you all the best with your visit. Indeed, it will be uncofrtable, but i will be praying things will go well, I commend you for having a heart to allow her another chance. Your remarkable my friend truly remarkable.
Blessings
Tory
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None should ever have to go through the things you did. the sad thing is that it happens daily to thousands of kids. It's a sad testament to our sick society today. I pray that you are out of this situation, and if not, that you leave it soon...Scott
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Aww..
This is heartbreaking.
I really don't know what to say.
This is full of emotion and the reader can clearly see that. I like the way you list the things you hate. It leaves an impact on the reader.
Well done, this is a beautiful write. Best of luck to you in the contest you entered.
iChewGlitter - x
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