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Satan's Maid

Dressed in black
from top to toe,
With my charcoal eyes,
I knocked her door!

My sinful heart
throbbed within,
As I put my hands
on her bleeding skin.

She crippled me
I stabbed her hard,
Inhaled her soul,
I left her numb.

No matter what she believes in,
I'll alawys find my way in
deep inside her thoughts and inside her mind,
cause i hold the key to her diamond mine

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  • Yokashi14
    November 7, 2007
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    That's really cool! Very dark..... creepy...... Awsome job!


  • less than a poet
    November 1, 2007

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    wow truly wow i loved it keep on rocking

    She crippled me
    I stabbed her hard,
    Inhaled her soul,
    I left her numb


  • Cari Cullen
    November 1, 2007
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    wow, this was scary! But I like it!


  • Tony El Great silver member
    November 1, 2007

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    Hey, diablo boy, one typo: "deep" instead of "depp," unless she is thinking about Johnny Depp, and that should piss you off. Liked the diamond mine metaphor.