As ice castles melt
upon withering winter ferns
dreams can be read
through disolving drops of juniper ice
each fern drips
and different pages are turned
as yesterday's branches
become twigs of today
a new story unfolds.
A contest entry
- Poems That Should Have Won...But Didn't by trista.
1050 points, ended February 24, 2008, 44 entries
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gorgeous
well done describing ferns
a new story unfolds
ferns drip
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Short and sweet; Simplicity at its best. I really enjoyed the meaning and thought put into it. Best of luck and thanks for entering my contest
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Beautiful. Thank you for entering.
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It's not quite what I'm looking for in the contest, but I really like it. Excellent imagery. Thanks for the entry.
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wonderful write, Love the flow and easily read. I love it all till the very end! Bravo Brabo Bravo !
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Great poem, good luck in the contest!
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