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Holding It All In

No one to open to
No one to let it out to
It's strange finding oneself here
Realizing you've always been here
A place where the pain and loneliness of a lifetime
Have been built up
And can't be released
The pains and troubles of other lifetimes

Built up in the same place

 

A dam of secrets

Well past breaking point

But holding

Protecting those it loves

But destroying the dam in the process

What happens when the dam bursts

And a flood of evils and secrets

Are released upon the world

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  • StarrieNacht
    November 1, 2007

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    Everyone finds themselves in a place where they just hide themselves. Why? Because they think it's best when in the end it isn't. Can't bottle everything up forever!
    Short, but to the point type of write. Well done!