clenched fists graps to
moment passing
fading by like seconds
tick, tock
eyes shut tight to
task at hand
afraid to let go
to see
these mystic tears...
Author notes
an unfinished contest entry
A contest entry
- Mystic Tears by Everwind Rising.
1100 points, ended November 4, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
what did you feel?
Comments
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I cannot wait to see the finale.....this is smashingly good...
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lol, thanx, but not sure if I want to finish this one. well, perhaps you have encouraged me...
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I wish that I could have seen the end product here. I liked where this was going and intensely curious of what the final edit would have been like.
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