why do i lie here tonight?
alone, cold, dark, scared.
wondering why? how could this happen?
why does God let me walk thru this place?
itchy with anticipation,
scratchy with pain.
holding on to a time,
when nothing mattered.
and eclipse in a world of chaos.
and i don't know what to say.
mind buzzing.
no words.
speechless.
and i am letting go.
cut as deep as it goes.
Please tell me what you think
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ouch... only thing I don't like is the use of "thru" instead of through. It doesn't make me take that line as serious as I usually would. other than that, its a chilling poem, nicely submitted at halloween or should I say sabhaim.
lexy xxx
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rough halloween ?
this is beautifully written anyhow .
scratchy with pain.
holding on to a time,
when nothing mattered.
and eclipse in a world of chaos.
enough said .
and I don't buy it that you don't know what to say , I think you have a lot to say and you know how you're feeling .
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