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Wake up
and see;
The Sun-
caressing the moon.
The Moon-
blushing relentlessly.
As a child
I never imagine
The color "Yellow"
connotes love.
~
Author notes
Written October 31, 2007
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE PROMPT by penman.
525 points, ended November 2, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my free verse by leander.
400 points, ended January 6, 2008, 45 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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"The color "Yellow"
connotes love."
I never realized that until now, LOL.. Two gold trophies can never go wrong, this one is really amazing man. Mabuhay pare!!
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lovely imagery here, nice shineys
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Two gold trophies
has to be heavy to lug with this poem. A lot of heavy metal to drag into a treasure chest of memories. Pull it out on bad days to make you feel better. Well done, poetess.
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congrats, Hensley...
another well deserved gold on this one...
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I really like the thought-provoking ending of this one
amazing poem again!
thanks for the entry
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Congratulations
I am simply thrilled to see the gold so properly placed on this piece. Truly, this is what 10 lines should look like. An excellent verse so very very well done. ~Pamela 
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well done!
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Oh, I love seeing the sun and the moon in the sky together and have often wanted to write a piece about it - this is so beautiful, I love this!
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Brilliant! ~Pamela
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Wonderful visuals here - loved the sense of colour and warmth one gets from reading this poem. And you've add quite a thought-provoking touch there at the end... a place where the sun and the moon meets!
~ Nicolette
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