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Ask Alice

Go ask Alice
When she's ten feet tall
If the mushroom will make you bigger
Or if parts of you will stay small
And if you go chasing rabbits
Looking for bunny hugs
Its more likely you'll eat magic mushrooms
And end up with sex and drugs

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    November 9, 2007
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    lol..love the references


  • sunny day
    November 9, 2007
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    Alice was in a wonderland with that little guy on the shroom. I enjoyed how you fashioned this one after the song. Now I have the tune in my head and I'll be singing it all day. LOL This was very humorous and I thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Watch out for those magic mushrooms! Love and God bless, Joyce


  • ebaby
    November 3, 2007
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    really good a sure winner I would say hhahaha and so funny.............

  • Tercarro
    November 1, 2007

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    Very different

    I like this take on Alice, it's funny but also well put together, a great little story that I could well connect with had I been back home.
    Brill, funny and different.
    TC


  • AceOSpades
    October 31, 2007

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    Wow you REALLY bit a ton of this from White Rabbit... You should at the very least put something in your author's notes crediting Jefferson Airplane...


  • PerVirtuous
    October 31, 2007
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