Through the darkness of life
Through the morass of highschool
One thing can make it all better
Piercing through all obstacles
Even in the morbid of situations
It shines through with no problems
It's just you, darling dearest
You're my moon that shines
Through the darkness of the night
You're my rainbow at the end
Of every storm that passes
You are all the goodness in my life
Author notes
TR, I love you
A contest entry
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565 points, ended November 5, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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Strange, Talented and a credit to its author.
Well Done -
Hey this is really sweet and kinda strange (in a good way! I love the line "You're my moon that shines
Through the darkness of the night" i really like this one!
Goodluck!
~dawn&hearts
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A precious love poem!
You can be very proud of this especially loving poem that gives the reader a very happy glow. 
Sweetness all around!
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Awww that was so beautiful. I can relate to this one. My girl has showed me the brighter side of the rainbow. Nicely done of this fine piece. Thanks for the entry and good luck.
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