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The one walking away

To that girl
on her own
crying out
from all that pain
all she does
is walk away
trying not to let it show
she just walks away...
like nothing happened
it could never be the the same
but there she goes
she cant breathe
she cant lie
but she will sit
sit and pray
maybe-She prays, hopes,
and wishes to die

and she will sing softly to herself

Bleeding roses never die
Cutting is a waste of time
while dieing is a new social suicide
Little girl that waits out here
is the one that he will always fear
but never take the time to tell
if its reality he wants, she will sell

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  • Spideresque
    November 9, 2007
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    I understand...

    I really like it, love. Especially the general view of how it's layed out. yay!!