Words have slept,
in twilight of time.
Searching the ether
within my mind.
Yet a momentous event,
crossed the horizon,
lifting these eyes
from gazing into the grey.
A yellow light
of scintilating intensity,
consuming the darkness
within which I dwelled.
Now words dream of union,
blending in bonded harmony,
of safety felt and passion's fire,
of soft caresses where time ceases.
Whispered words engulf eternity,
feeling you besides me.
Essence suffuses my instances,
imparting endless moments of you.
A singular bliss cradling stars,
shining forth from your eyes.
You are the wonder,
that turned my world.
Author notes
I am so thankful for you. Never one moment that for me you do not shine!
A contest entry
- I am a true romantic, I love to read beautiful romance poetry by Entwining Beauty.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 28 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's All In A Kiss by silverscent.
450 points, ended October 3, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is beautiful. The descriptions you portrayed were beautiful. I couldn't tell you my favourite part because it was all wonderful. Thanks for entering.
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This is beautiful.
"A singular bliss cradling stars,
shining forth from your eyes.
You are the wonder,
that turned my world."
I love those lines
Well done and thank you for entering x
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Wow this piece is so romantic simply awesome!
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beautiful good luck
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good luck such beautiful write
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good luck such beautiful write
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Awsome
This is a wonderful write I love how you captured so much with in your choice of words.
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Absolutely fantastic. This is amazing you have done such a wonderful thing with your words, thank you so much for sharing this with me, and thank you for entering, best of luck to you!
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Great write and good luck in the contest!
Lesli -
my dear bro the love you show illuminates within every breath you both take. you both have me everlasting blessings of love forevermore xxxxxxxxxx
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Very nice piece of work I wish you the best of luck in the 1st rounds contest as well as the other and what a beautiful picture as well.
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Luv,
This is beautiful. Deeply heartfelt words so loving and sincere. Soft flow, which I always love in love writes for they make it all the more real.
It's amazing how a moment can change our life's forever.
Wonderful!!
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How beautiful this is. I know just what you are saying with this heart felt piece. I feel the same way about my husband!!!
Thank you so much for posting this wonderful piece in my contest and I wish you all the best in it. Cathy
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