Sunset color of beauty so bright
You and me go far,far from sight
Fields of green and gold corn
Hand-n-hand me and you
Nothing wrong as can be
Just you and me
Hand-n-hand
Horse and
Us
Author notes
OPTION 2 - Nonet
A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
rhyming is optional.
line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllable
I think this is bad,but I tried.....
A contest entry
- Round 3 ~ of 5 - ONLY 15 will advance to the FINAL ROUND by Florida Sunshine.
525 points, ended November 8, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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As said earlier~ I know our free writers will find this most challenging ~ Your a little off on your syllable count on just a line or two.... Actually as you read the piece I rather enjoyed it... The colors add to the imagery of seeing a couple in a rural area, riding off on a horse against a sunset. < If that is what you wanted to convey you did!!!!
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You're a terrific poet with a tough challenge~ You've done wonderfully to reach Round 3~ Good luck to you~ -
Wonderful
This isn't bad, it is great! I know the feeling this is my first formed poetry to, but this has beautiful imagery to it. You have done a great job Best of luck to you in this round
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