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Hush

Missing image

imprisoned in darkness

the whispering is always the same

sibilant whispers

driving her insane:

“… hush my little darling

don’t you cry

mommy’s got special medicine

to put in baby’s eyes”

“… hush little baby

don’t make a peep

or mommy will give you medicine

that puts bad girls to sleep”

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  • Dark Edge
    December 10, 2007
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    Wicked, Crazy, Insane, Disturbing!
    This is definatly a highlight in my contest. Great Job!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 13, 2007
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    Wickedly disturbing!

    Well the pic was almost enough for me ewwww 10/10 for chills n spills, spine definitely shivering! Best of luck in the contest!


    • malkinpuss silver member
      November 13, 2007
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      LadyDementia

      Thanks so much for your encouragement ... I love the dark side of art and that pic truly is wicked!

  • Gods Precious
    November 13, 2007

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    ...........tension..............what more tension..............what here it comes...........no the tension still building up

    Good peace, but for some reason I think in a sense this is personal?? What lies behind all this.

    Keep chin up

    • malkinpuss silver member
      November 13, 2007
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      Gods Precious

      Thank you for your concern but it just came from my head when i saw the pic!


  • Kuranya gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    Haunting yet amazing.... seems like something you would expect to hear in that moment of a scary moment.. you know the one..... where that music is playing.. eerie.. and brilliant

    Karen


  • Androgyneric
    November 1, 2007
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    Hauntingly beautiful.
    Amazingly dark picture.
    Excellent!


    • malkinpuss silver member
      November 1, 2007
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      androgyneric

      Thanks so much. I wrote it for a contest but missed the deadline! But that's ok! You read it and liked it and that is enough for me!


  • EvilKate
    November 1, 2007

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    - adroitly dark whisper here. (oh is the missing space between 'medicine' and 'to' indended? If not, there's a free heads-up).

    I like it - you managed to pull of a childhood theme with very dark tones.

    • malkinpuss silver member
      November 1, 2007
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      EvilKate

      Thanks for the heads-up! and for your great comment. Thanks so much!

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