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Amazing Little Minds

Thoughts swirling, forming many questions
to which they want concise answers.
Young minds form creativity
into artist's work space.
Efflorescent dreams
dance playfully
in wondrous
childish
brain.


Author notes

A nonet has nine lines. The first line has nine syllables, the second line eight syllables, the third line
seven syllables, etc... until line nine that finishes withone syllable. It can be on any subject and
rhyming is optional.

line 1 - 9 syllables
line 2 - 8 syllables
line 3 - 7 syllables
line 4 - 6 syllables
line 5 - 5 syllables
line 6 - 4 syllables
line 7 - 3 syllables
line 8 - 2 syllables
line 9 - 1 syllable


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Comments

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  • Florida Sunshine
    November 2, 2007

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    Wow~ I'm impressed~ the form is excellent... some poets only focus on the syllable count ~ you covered all the bases. The write is so very true as well... I love it over all you did an excellent job!

    Good luck to you~ and congrats for making it to Round 3


  • LadyDementia gold member
    November 1, 2007

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    Beautiful

    This is wonderfully done. You have great imagery and a superb shape. Best of luck in this round

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    Very good sweety.It is very true children are amazing and have brilliant minds they are little sponges goodluck to you in the contest


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    L6 "dance"

    This is an excellent nonet, well done. La x


    • TwilightDazzles
      October 31, 2007
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      Thank you for the correction!! I read it over and somehow did not catch that!

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