I'm in need of a little self gratification
lover would you like to watch?
Fuck, the thought of you doing
Just that makes me feel so hot
Watch me as I suck my fingers
Saliva running down
Getting aroused fingers teasing clit
Rubbing them hard around my moist outer lips
Listen to my moans as my pleasure intensifies
I know you are loving this
I can see by the look in your eyes
Watch me play just for you
Tease and tantalise
I feel my slit beckoning my touch
A rush of excitement courses through me
Thrusting eager fingers deep inside
between moisture sated thighs
Rapid sighs come from me as I lick my lips
Tasting my juices just for you
Sliding my hands over ample breasts
teasing nipples erect
Tension builds
As I start to sin
You hot yet honey?
Did I hear you sigh?
Your groans of delight
so turn me on
Fuck, I need this
I want you to see me break down
under my touch
See my skin hot glistening wet, flushed
Reaching for my U shaped dong
Deeper penetration now required
Dual masturbation I desire
Placing dildo in cunt and ass
Now takes the pleasure a level higher
Thrusting ever deeper
The friction feels so good
I'm getting high by my own touch
Thrusting harder faster deeper
Keeping the rhythm up
Groans become uncontrolled
A deep throated husk
Body starts to rock quiver shake
Watch how my hips gyrate
Vigorous thrusts hit my G spot
Back arching
Body losing control
Thighs tensing, ecstasy
Juices start to free flow
Biting my lower lip
Eyes closed head back
Final thrust pleasure to intense
Satisfied Orgasm subsides
Throbbing my body spent
Feeling euphoric as
you watch me cum
The evening is not over
As I respond to my lovers touch
Now we are ready...ready to fuck.
Author notes
Option #2
A contest entry
- 51st Contest by Tarja.
475 points, ended November 1, 2007, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Afternoon Delight by Brazos.
3500 points, ended December 14, 2007, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Feeling Naughty? by sekmhet eye of ra.
600 points, ended February 24, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Adult Pre Write Party by theredcatjazzoflove.
600 points, ended May 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"Fuck, the thought of you doing" -- doing what?
"As I start to sin"
hah! i think you were already sinning. dirty, dirty!!!
"A deep throated husk
Body starts to rock quiver shake"
these two lines are my favorite my favorite. you're a very descriptive writer, and these lines diplayed that wonderfully.
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Wow!
How very intensely passionate! Whew!
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commenting again...still love the imagery in this piece
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Thanks sis.
sugar
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I loved it when you came...now I am coming on you! Good luck in the contest.
Brazos
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Hot, Hot, Hot, read. You have done a good job on this write and it fits the pic well.....Thanks for entering.......novy
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wooooooooWeeeeeeeeee
Hot and hotter. I raced to the end of this one and read it again. Great job Sugar. How deeply erotic this was
~ Thanks for sharing - Mykeeeee
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What can I say
I went from
to 
Again thanks for reading always appreciated
~sugar~
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HotHOtHOTTER.....
I can only say....I am off to take a shower....COLD
Good luck in this contest,
XXJeannette
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Appreciate you reading and commenting
Hope the cold shower worked
~sugar~xx
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wow this is very good!
i would say nice imagery but it really happend so great night,lol
you did an amazing job with this peice here,thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest! -
fucken delicuous! and your trying to arouse me bad michelle! if so stop it i must let my tongue thoughts rest remeber i am trying to be one of charlies good angels for now congrads on the bronze babe
i fucken love you
julia forever
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Which Charlies are you LOL!!
Love reading your comments juju
Love you ~sugar~
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Damn this is hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job... I'm impressed... good luck in the contest.
/q-pid/
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Mmmm Mmmm...the ladies of essence are too much! This is hott! I love this its so sexy yet intense. Congrats on your trophy! Keep Writing!
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Thank you MahoganyFlow
I always appreciate you
Love ~sugar~
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good grief this was erotic flames at the best i think you did a excellent job it was a pleasure to read
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Thanks you for reading Lil Atl
I love reading your comments
Always valued and appreciated
~sugar~
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OHHH Boyyyy.. This was indeed insane.. Watch you masturbate for me - hmmm - my mind is drifting elsewhere.. What were we talking about again?
Oh yeah - OOOO, Sugarzz.. Just too yummy..
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Hi there Whenitefallz
I can't remember for the life of me what we were talking about. LOL!!!
As always it's a pleasure to have you read
~sugar~
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Just awesome! I am so glad you entered this! My husband enjoys watching it too.. however he never denies me... what he can give!
If you know what I mean... this was so hot. This made me wanna go to my room for a little while! You naughty girl. Well done and thank you for entering.
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Masturbation
is the Freaky Key to our Libido
great write, I enjoyed this...tasty and naughty
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yep sis
I don't know what came over me
just had to write I was feeling a littleish
Appreciate you reading as always
Love ~sugar~
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INSPIRATIONAL!!
I do NOT have a virus... DAMN, that was hot!! And getting hotter (and harder!) !!!!!
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Appreciate you reading
Glad you enjoyed it
~sugar~
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Yikes!
Now that was hot! I never knew masturbating could be so intense. Great job.
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Glad you enjoyed it Jaime.
you would be surprised.
Thanks for reading my dear friend
Love your friend
~sugar~
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I couldn't have put it better if I'd tried.
That was HOT!!!! You got me going, I may have to go and do something about it........
All the best in the contest, not that you'll need it, a definate winner.
Love
Sue
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Thank you Sue.
A cold shower could be useful LOL!!!!
Appreciate you reading
love ~sugar~
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I've I didn't have a damn stomach virus - I'd be masturbating to this, too.
Quite a sensual, kinky, and stimulating scene that I really enjoyed watching, Sugar - that I will have to bookmark and cum back to play with when I'm feeling better. All I can say is this Lucky Fellow had more self control than me for if I had been watching you I would have had me willy out in a flash JERKING for you - so we could cum by our own hand together and clean up each others creamy mess with out mouths and tongues! GOOD LUCK in the contest, Baby!
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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DAMN! That bloody virus! I've had these thoughts all day. Thought I should write them down. Thought this would pep you up a bit.
As always I appreciate you reading.
Thank you for the luck.
Love you ~sugar~
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STUNNING
WELL, MY PC SCREEN HAS JUST MELLLLLLTEEEED. HAHAHAHHA, HOT, EROTIC, SENSUAL, DEEP POWERFUL WRITING THIS WAS. WONDERFUL IMAGERY TOO. I HAD TO OPEN MY WINDOW, FOR FRESH AIR. PHEW. HAHAHAHAH. WELL DONE, SUGAR, AMAZING WRITE.
WAYNE
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Cheers hun,
Glad you enjoyed this
Let me know if you need some ice to cool down lol!!
As always I appreciate you reading
Love~sugar~x
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