Absence of your love makes my spirit bleeds
Each time you murmur in silent hush
I become burnt ashes lost in the mist
that yearn for a place to be
Sometimes I dream of what lies beyond my reaching
as I travel to places that are opposite of misery
There I'd share with you the moonlight's mystery
Only if our love would stir in sublimity
As my unyielding destiny travelled in foreign land
I sacrifice every bit of blood there's in my veins
I fought with pride, and gave every bit of my strength
frantically, I walked away with empty hands
Picturing a quiet place on eternal bliss
I catch sunset rays from other galaxies
and as I absorb life's fragrance through my pores
my soul then clogues, and I can't breathe no more
Love is not something one can fabric
therefore, I must accept the bitterness
that scatters my heart mercilessly
as I become a stranger of your sanctuary
A contest entry
- Something Beautiful Please by Riftkin.
475 points, ended November 3, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Heal my broken heart!!!!!! by hopelesspoet.
950 points, ended July 18, 2008, 10 entries
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very well put i wish you luck in the contest
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interesting
nice imagery as always. it sounded like you were drowning, which i suppose you were... drowning in sorrow. but it sounded like you were physically drowning too. or maybe that's just me. anyway good write.
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Interesting take on this
for it could be something
more underfoot
thank you for this entry
Riftkin -
this was really good. I wasn't sure what the rhyming scheme was but i liked the flowed. i also liked the imagery of galaxies sigh...
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beautiful write as always, i wouldnt expect any less of you then the best.
glad to see some new stuff from you.
i really enjoyed this.
take care hun
Tasha
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