echoes resounding down empty halls of shadow and fade
a quick glance and erratic pulse
i slip behind the curtain as my breathing overpowers me
my shoulders heaving with each shaking breath
closer now, so close i can almost feel it
my mouth silently screaming for someone
//help me//
Author notes
used the picture as a prompt. the french just means "trap" (the title i mean)
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A contest entry
- - Hallow Not Hollow - (For One Night Only) by Desire.
525 points, ended November 1, 2007, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!
Welcome and Thank You for Your entry
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piege
Your words brought forth many images,
and allowed the reader to digest
as if inside Your shell, breathing
Your breath...
Love the words: echoes resounding
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
This will be judged shortly~~
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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