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Day’s Gone By

Here’s to choice.
Here’s to freedom.
Make your choice now.
...Choose life.
It’s all wrong.
It’s never how we want.
But the battle lost.
Is nothing on the war won.
Forget those you had.
Forget those you fear.
Smile for tomorrow.
Don’t cry for yesterday.
Friend or foe.
You’ll never know.

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  • hmmmmmmm
    April 30, 2008

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    Thank you!

    This is a really sweet poem and very optimistic! Thanks for entering. Good luck and I'll keep you posted!


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    December 4, 2007

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    Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering

    Thank you for this. It shows that sometimes we have people who just want to see the good in life, and enjoy it

    Keep writing and good luck
    Faerie
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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    December 2, 2007
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    Thanks for entering and Welcome to allpoetry

    A nice message, the moral to the story so to speak. Life is hard there is no doubt about it. but the choices we make can decide for us our outlook on how we live it.

    I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.

    God Bless
    Tammy
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  • Wanyenze
    November 29, 2007
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    not bad


  • Dienush
    November 18, 2007

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    This poem has a very optimistic message, I like that. I think you meant "days" in the title. I like the short lines and the light tone you use, this is quite inspirational. Good luck in the contest

    ~Diana


  • Symphonie
    November 15, 2007

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    Nice. It really reminds me of what someone would say at a rally for pro-life... which is so not a bad thing. I loved this. Good luck.


  • Gold-feathers
    November 15, 2007
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    Lovely

    Yeah! isn't it lovely an' positive.I love the idea.


  • creationsfromheart
    November 12, 2007
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    I like this one very nice.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    November 5, 2007
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    Thanks for your entry :]

    G'day Hypocritical Oath ♥

    Very uplifting write you have penned.
    It is better to keep going in life rather than getting stopped by tears.

    Well done
    Best of luck to you in the contest
    Welcome to AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Amanda


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 3, 2007

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    I found this a very positive piece. It's hard but best to move forward rather than crying for yesterday.
    Thanks so much for your entry
    Gaylene

    • Hypocritical Oath
      November 3, 2007
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      Thanks! ☺

      Yeah, without a doubt. It's too easy to get caught up in what's happened, rather than to focus on what's ahead.


  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    November 1, 2007
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    Thanks for entering

    This is interesting on the one side as it starts strong and gives me a clear picture but then it all gets a little confused. On the one side it feels like this is what you are trying to do but it also distracts from the strength. All in all, not a bad write.

    Good luck - let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosmary

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