I cant see anymore my paths too dark.
Choked by a smog of lies in a forgotten world.
Seen and heard only by demons.
Who are walking road of flames.
Sinful wishes and twisted memories.
Imposed on me by ancient light.
My heart no longer beats, my blood has turned black.
Roaming a discarded wasteland.
My every move fueled by selflessness.
Surrounded by everyone but seen by no one.
I crawl in search of distant hope.
Yet hooks of poison pull me back.
Into a heartless pit of pain.
Now I see what went wrong.
Dealing with unwanted chaos and disorder.
No longer shall I be your empathic slave.
Only now will I survive without you.
Living without your pain and hate.
No more desire for you, only desire for my own peace.
A contest entry
- Make me cry _Prewrites now welcomed cuz people buggin me LOL_ by badddgirl.
600 points, ended December 3, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Bend in the Road by second-born.
500 points, ended November 10, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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I liked the ending a lot...seemed to me that you've already pick up your self on the floor and promise never to let anyone to hurt you again...thank you for sharing your poem...
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