In my eyes you are perfect
In my eyes we are sane
In my eyes we have have a future
In my eyes happiness overcomes sadness
In my eyes you are everything
In my eyes we will always be
In my eyes my family loves you
In my eyes we get along
In my eyes you are my baby
In my eyes we are one
Author notes
This isn't much but I thought I'd go ahead and enter it anyway. If it's not what you want DQ it
A contest entry
- Further Morning Quickiness...10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's up to you by Marctheman.
700 points, ended November 26, 2007, 62 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Really cute piece you have penned here. I found it a very fun and light read. Thanks for sharing.
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This was really nice. I think the flow and meaning behind this poem was really good and the wording was really good, as well. I think you could improve your grammar a bit, Leslie, but other then that, this was really good.
Keep up the great work! I look forward to reading many more poems of yours in the very near future. -
Lovely write...Soft and loving
Lynda
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very lovely, most sincere, simple words and from the heart...PK
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prompt is:
“The poet knows himself only on the condition that things resound in him, and that in him, at a single awakening, they and he come forth together out of sleep.”
~Jacques Maritain
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the pic above
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you may want to wait for the prompt...This contest's theme is based on a prompt I will give when 10 spots are filled..
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