Touching in the light of glow
come in time that we have grown,
and never had been, such deepening moments
in seas I have seen;
or risen as well among climbing eagles.
Night brings a nymph enchanted flower
and fragrance of soft blue air,
Closed eyes bring you to longing hands, searching fingertips;
I slowly kissed your hands, and lingered there
leaving a piece of my heart in your palms.
Author notes
"In the right light, at the right time, everything is extraordinary."
~Aaron Rose
A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie 10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful!
Congrats on the Bronze ... well deserved! ...JB
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very lovely how you put this together. lovely imagery, and I delighted in your poem, best to you in contest~blessings always~
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Lovely is site to realize miracle, and in the blushing eastern manifest, she bares my soul inside her center...such a piece of humble transference...lovely
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These lines melted me:
"Closed eyes bring you to longing hands,searching fingertips;
I slowly kissed your hands, and lingered there
leaving a piece of my heart in your palms."
This is exquisite...
Lynda
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Wow. Good job. I loved how you laced so many phrases and images together...and so smoothly, too. Wow. Blew me away. Brilliant!!! I wish you all the best.
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Oh I love this. The ending line was perfect. Good luck.
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prompt is:
"In the right light, at the right time, everything is extraordinary."
~Aaron Rose
or
the picture above...
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