Morning blossoms in rising ripples,
parting petals
with a sun-kissed welcome
of anew.
Freshness flourishes upon lilied wonder
seeking placid passions' captivation
to shiver in slivers
of silver,
swaying in windy whispers
of moon bathed pillow.
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A contest entry
- Early Bird Quickie 10/10L/30m by poet2angels.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pimp up my quickies or snippets by leander.
400 points, ended December 4, 2007, 44 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - for those who have ME on their favorites by leander.
900 points, ended January 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a stellar poem sweety, but you are already on my favorites list
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This is such a beautiful read. I love the way you described a Lotus Kissed. Awesome read!!!
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This is beautiful! It flows gracefully like the ripples on the water! I love the beggining...
"Morning blossoms in rising ripples,
parting petals
with a sun-kissed welcome
of anew."
Such a serene beauty!!!
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This is lovely!! Something beautiful and fresh, and what is more beautiful than dawn's first lotus? Lovely touches of alliteration here too. Glad i read this one tonight!!
~ Nicolette
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Came back to read again, sweetie; this is just so very beautiful
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Congrats! A wonderful read. Frans
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this is pure beauty
that your fingers
have given us to read
congratulations
on these trophies too.
Riftkin
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Congrats on the trophies. This is amazing. I love the imagery and flow. Beautiful!
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great!!! i can now see why ur's was chosen to be in the spotlight! congrates celticmoon! seriously! lol
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I love the impact in these few words and I really like the picture you put with this. Thank you for sharing this piece and good luck with your writing.
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This was beautiful to read.
Congrats to you.
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Good to see this in the spotlight I really loved this piece
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Wow!!! Very well done on the trophies for this incredible and beautiful poem. I've falling in love with it. It's amazing!
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How I fell in love with this most beautiful poem, and then I saw it was you lol
Very well done sweets!
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This is truly a piece of art worthy of gold. It croons right into ones heart and soul.Very deserving of gold and more
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Awesome!
So very, very deserving of the gold, hon
Your pen bleeds forth the most beautiful ink!
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OMG this is absolutely brilliant. So beautiful, definitely deserved that gold. Well done mum,
Lil
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If only I could look at things the way you do.... then I'd be a lot better of a person on the inside. This i sso beautiful and well crafted that I can see all of it in my head. Fantastic work.
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Beautiful!
Such alliteration and feathered flow!
Romantic and lovely!
This is excellent!
Lynda
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Lovely... imagery and descriptions... skillful word use"anew" as a place or thing...very unique; soft beautiful poetry here...PK
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Well, my bell does ring in such a chiming configuration...eleation's envelope of time to tingle
when words mix move to measure mingle, across your morning muse of heaven...nicely done my friend... -
Wow. This is a most beautiful piece, poet, and I loved how you built the reader some images to see...and feel, almost. I loved the way you used the "of" lines. Really creative. I wish you all the best.
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I never know, how awake I am
when sky is still
in inky well
but glad to see the night cover fly
in Cletic moon to quill her quivers...
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prompt is:
"In the right light, at the right time, everything is extraordinary."
~Aaron Rose
or
the picture above...
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