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I will...

Now it's over, we are done
so this was just play and fun?
my heart is in pain, it won't survive
but I have to act like I'm still alive

feelings don't change in a week or in a day
but there's nothing I can do or say
you play, but I feel the real way
I would fight for you and I would stay

you thought you knew and changed your mind
If it's for real, It's not easy to find
then you don't give up, you stay and fight
you STAY AND FIGHT, if it has ever been real or right

you don't know what you had,
It makes me angry, it makes me sad
I thought we felt the same
but to you, this was just a game

I guess you think I'm unfair
but don't you even, Dear ...
you have yelled and begged me for trust
ensured me of your love, passion and lust

I lost control, I let you in
I've LOST my mind, I've let you win
... To every promise and every word
It's the best lie I've ever heard

I wanna hate you but you are in my head
I love you, and I feel so misslead
I want you, but like you were before
cause I'm not sure who you are anymore

I meant every word and every kiss
there's nothing I won't miss
I loved everything and every part
I gave you all I had in my heart

you said you were in love, I hope you are aware
that now I feel like you didn't really care
Do you even know what love is?
it's not something you can take back like this

I will be hurt, I will carry this pain
I will cry, feel broken to pieces and act insane
I will fight to forget my love, to repress
I will go on, I have to cause you deserve less

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  • Cyanide Milkshake
    July 3, 2008
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    Nice last lines. Feel the pain in this, and your sense of survival through all the senseless damage of loss.


  • Condemd RyeZing
    February 26, 2008
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    Well done. Congrats on a great poem. I liked it, quite good. Nice job. Thanks for entering.


  • make-me-feel
    January 24, 2008
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    wonderful


  • notsotorturedartist
    December 8, 2007

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    very good reminds me of a song i had written great minds think alike. love hate relationships are so hard to describe but you did it pretty well good luck


  • Wilted Rose Bush
    December 8, 2007

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    Well done

    Fantastic, Well done. I like this and it made me remember times like that. Keep writing. =] good luck


  • apoeticinjustice gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    love lost is such a powerful fuel for our muse. You've written on a feeling most have felt at one time or another. An enjoyable read.
    Rory


    • Daniela-Linder
      November 12, 2007
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      Thanks alot :-)

      Thanks alot. I loved that you enjoyed it.
      / Daniela

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