Dear father in heaven
I come before your presence
To thank you for my breaths
For saving me from death
For giving me new life
Through you i'am reborn
From warning me of wrong's
That I'll be facing all lifelong
But with you by my side
Who else do I need?
For you gave your only begotten son
To die on the cross and bleed
For me
So I come befor you now
In your presence Heavenly father
To tell you that I'am free
From the torment of my wrong
That you took away from me
For you are the truth, the life and the way
In your Holy and Almighty name
Jesus Christ I pray
Amen
Author notes
C.o.g.
I talk to my father every night.
I thank him and talk to him about everything.
Becuase he's the only that can do anything.
For he makes the imposible, possible.
He deserve's all the glory and thanks
He listen's and answer's to all my prayer's.
On his time not myan.
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Truly beautiful.
Again I have read a truly beautiful piece, I decided to read through the poems posted here. They are turning out to be marvelous pieces of work. -
This is a wonderful write. Very well written. I am not going to tell you to change this or that because it is your poem, and you wrote it the way you wanted it to be written. One thing though, you are missing an e on before. Great job.
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Please feel free to correct me on my poem if you feel I need correcting becuase I always succed to be better or make it better!
and thank you I be right on that! God bless!
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This is a very sweet poem, open and frank conversation with God is so great. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest!
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Beautiful Prayer
This is true what hope is there without our heavenly Father. Your silver trophy is beautiful and more of a blessing for it came from a prayer poem. Thank you for reminding me to count my blessings everyday. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Many Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Heartfelt Prayer.............
This was straight from your heart and yur relationship with God show as strong through your daily prayer with him. Kelle will be inslired by this I am sure. Thanks for your entry and the best of luck in the contest!!!~~Toni~~ -
beautiful
Hi! I really liked this, it has great emotion. I think in the second stanza your "i" needs to be capitalized and in the forth you're missing the "e" from before. Other than that it's really great!
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thank you for your comment I will work on what you said thank you again and God bless!
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Beautiful
I've been struggling with my faith lately, and your poem helped me to put some of my struggles back into perspective. I too have found myself praying randomly throughout the days now to help me through my daily struggles and hardships. Thank you for such a beautiful prayer. Goodspeed dear.
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Congratulations on winning the Silver . A well deserved poem. Your words were very uplifting and a pleasure to read this morning. You tsake care. Sandy
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Thank you for your entry
A beautiful and loving prayer. This just says it all. Uplifting and praising of God.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
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It's our father in heaven that gives us life , peace and joy and is the answer to all of our problems , without him in our lives we can not succeed in our lives , so lets make a stand and pray together for one another and for all of those who need him the most and lets give thanks to our lord and saviour jesus christ
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Beautiful! He is indeed the truth, the life and the way! I especially appreciated your author's comments. It is awesome to let people know just how strong your faith is! I loved the poem... Full of truth and deep with a profound message and meaning! Thanks for sharing it and best wishes!
Blessings,
Frogz~
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Beautiful! I absolutely love what you put in your author's notes! This poem is amazing. And the next to last stanza where you talk about how your free from the torments of all your wrongs- that's beautiful and I sincerly hope you are there. I know I'm not. But, really, the imagery of you standing in the presence of God is truly beautiful! God bless you!
Luv ya oodles!
Courtney
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this is really good! i can really feel this... anyway, great job and best of luck in this contest!
"So I come befor you now
In your presence Heavenly father
To tell you that I'am free
From the torment of my wrong
That you took away from me"
great part.
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I love when something comes from the heart, this is beautiful. God Bless you
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This is beautiful!
What you pen here is straight from the heart and captures that longing to be alone with the Father, so perfectly.
Keep praying. And keep writing.
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I like this poetic prayer. You write about truths central to our faith. I would use "saving" rather than "avoiding"
in the first stanza.
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Good idea i edited it
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I do love prayer poems. This one is right from your heart to the Father's heart. He loves us - His children - so much. Beautifully penned.
- joanne
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a powerful prayer my friend. and per your author's notes, of course God does it on His own time. Were it done on anyone else's it would screw everything up. LOL! good luck and God bless.
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Very funny yes your right Lol God Bless! =)
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Powerful words of trust and love
to a powerful Father we have up above!
Your faith is strong
from what I can see and I
pray that your faith will
always continue to be fresh
never withered nor waivering.
You're a Mighty Man of God!
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I really like this poem, it really shows your faith and devotion and it's well written
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