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she doesn't really mean a woman

She becomes a whisper
that runs against the wind,
jagging at your open throat
thrashing, condemning
everything you ever loved,
she controls you and
you never even see her slip
her soft arms around you.

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Just a short poem I wrote on the spot.

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  • Forgotten Lilith
    October 31, 2007

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    Is this about about death? or is this about a mother figure.. It's beautifully written, cryptic and metaphoric.


    • bloodislikewine
      October 31, 2007
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      It's about depression. I have bipolar II disorder and it's a struggle everyday.