You were a gift from god
My saveing grace
A torn little girl
With an angels face
The last nine months
have only brought me pain
Not knowing if you were alive
Or if the grave you were lain
If you think sorry wasn't good enough
Then you should know you are wrong
Weve grown to close together
You've shown me where I belong
I belong with you
And only you
I know this is hard
But we will find our way threw
Even threw this "17'' screen"
You know i love you
And I know you love me
Or at least I hope u do
I found my inspireation
I found my will to write
I found my love....
Even thought I can never hold her threw the night
Author notes
#2. this was written about a girl who i love but she lives in texas and i live in idaho, and because this doesnt actually say wat i would do, i would continue to love her as i have for the last couple of years, physical contact isnt what love is, it is just one of many ways to show it
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the ends of the verses sometime did really fit the verse, i did enjoy though how you tried to rhyme the best you could && at times it did work.
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This is so very sweet and I know it must be hard to be so far apart from some one you love so much. I realise that physical contact is only a way of expressing love, it's just that it is so much a part of most loving relationships and it is so amazing, I mean the first kiss, or when you are making love and you feel as if you are one person. Anyway I love this peice. Thanks so much for this entery and good luck!
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Wow
That Was A Great Write!
Most Enjoyable~
-YFC-
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I cried when i read this.
I read it to my friends.
The last words make me cringe.
Its fucking, beautiful;
I love you.
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