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Black Kat

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Acorns pop against the roof

with their exploding heads

pounding the night like firecrackers

and the nerves along my spine

tingle with a lonely dread

of an invisible breath

panting along the hills and hollows

 

I wish I didn’t dream of this wild thing

ravishing my soul with such an undead hunger

 

It feeds off the lies that I’ve buried inside

and rips the jugular out of tomorrow

 

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  • rebeka
    November 12, 2007

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    wow, i can hear this poem in my head, the pop of acorns is a wonderful way to start this off, an intense read and i loved it.


  • Axelle Black
    November 2, 2007
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    Your imagery's way out there. I simply love it.