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Where wind blows
And hair flows free
Unencumber me from duty

Where flowers grow
Distaining rows
In lush and wild beauty

Unencumber me

Beneath aqua skies
Where I come alive

Frolicking amid birds and bees

 


Unencumber me
Unencumber me
Unencumber me

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  • Mallig gold member
    November 6, 2007

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    This is great, I love what you did with this prompt! I loved "Where flowers grow
    Distaining rows". I feel a bit less encumbered having read this!


  • Riftkin gold member
    November 2, 2007
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    this is beauty
    thank you

    Riftkin


  • Kuranya gold member
    November 2, 2007

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    Yes it asked for beauty and you provide.... there was a certain fel of breeziness to this piece, almost floating through your words, tremendous entry

    Karen