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Capturing forest light

Earthy musk,
moss-still air,
filtered eveningtwi,
softly falling spears
embracing the dust,
suspended still
in an infinite dance

nature

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  • pruedence
    January 29, 2008

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    One of natures beauties...the forest carries many beautiful and wonderful things for the mind to grasp onto. You have found something beautiful within your words...lovely, thanks for sharing


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    January 27, 2008

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    This is such a lovely write with such great imagery. "Softly falling spears embracing the dust". This is such a lovely line. Well done.