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week 2




taking control of you
taking you from behind
without asking
biting
slapping
licking
your face and ass
leaving you
naked
contemplating
about our next time together
in bed and
sweat stained
walls


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  • Suzanne Dia silver member
    November 14, 2007
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    you kinda scare me ...

  • SpinCycle
    November 5, 2007
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    anything you do is delicious

  • dark cajun shadow
    November 4, 2007
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    Mmmmm sounds delicious!


  • Miss Kristy
    October 30, 2007

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    AMAZING

    This is such a beautiful amazing poem! I love it!! So many powerful words used!!!!!, and used i so many ways, very creative and its almost as if you could feel every emotion, every feeling, every thought, as if it was happening to me, as if it was about me!! Very beautifully written as well, it almost seems as if it was flowing beautifully!! and very excellent!! I wouldnt change a thing on this it is too good! Very beautiful and very discriptive!! I love poetry with the raw feel and you know that this person really has writting this from their heart!!!

    HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!
    Kit
    x x x

  • SpinCycle
    October 30, 2007
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