Little golden fins
swim fast to reach far,
after entire morning
still where I started.
Is this bowl
too big
or just small
as the sun
heats up the waves
down to my abode.
I stick around
to catch this zany world
encircling me
instead of my fishmates.
Author notes
For the fish...shaped like a goldfish in it's tribute...
In a list
A contest entry
- the language of fish by Cat.
500 points, ended November 1, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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the word zany is one of those words that just pops out of a poem- thank you for following the contest directives- much appreciated
thanks so much for entering the contest
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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Neat shape you have created with these words in the lines - gold fish. Likd the flow and the story you share of this little fishy.
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Glad you liked it!
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