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At This Moment

At this moment,
I am wondering now,
Why did I ever love you,
I gave you what I could,
But I guess you wanted my virginity too,

I said no,

But you wanted a yes,

So I guess,

Lord sent me in the right direction,

But you in the wrong,

Just this morning,

I seen you die,

Tears flown thourgh mine eyes,

But hey life goes on,

But without you mine just freeze. 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    November 11, 2007

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    Broken hearts do mend, especially in youth :) Great job expressing your thoughts here. Your emotion is strong and it is well doen :)