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Halloween Fun - haiku





busy night
witches and brooms
sky jam



naked ghosts
after Halloween party
laundry day



Halloween party
sun catches late Count
ashes all over








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  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    June 25

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    Hoodwink!!

    What a fantastic creation of some perfect haiku, I wish I could write them with this kind of image. Well done on a fine piece again dear poet.


  • nom de guerre
    December 29, 2007

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    I have good memories of this poem. We had some silly laughs while you were writing this one. It's those bats, who wouldn't find those funny?

    "Late Count" That's still worthy of the highest "Yemish praise."


  • leo2
    November 3, 2007

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    You do these short forms so well. What would Halloween be without a few bare bones running amok?...lol. Excellent work my friend.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Desire gold member
    November 1, 2007
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    Oh My Word!!



    I had to chuckle at the last one

    Oh my stomach hurts!!

    Reminded me of a movie

    Love this Sweet Soul!
    You are so darn Creative~~Brilliant
    Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
    Best wishes to You in all You do my Friend
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • a u r a
    October 31, 2007

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    Wow ! Mari, these are brilliant lines that capture the essence and fun of Halloween ever so effectively -Absolutely stunning !


  • niikkii
    October 30, 2007

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    ahahahahah i like it!! ITS a fun haiku!! u should write moooreee!!
    hey cn u comment ma poems?? pleasE?? thnxxxx,,,,,,nikki


  • NoWayJo
    October 30, 2007
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    TRAFFIC JAM OF WITCHES:


    LOTSA NAKED GHOSTS:



    AN ASHY COUNT DRACULA HANGING OUT IN THE BACKGROUND OF THIS BACKGROUND WITH A FEW OTHER GHOULS TOO:


    Have a wonderful and  Mari!

    Jo

  • NoWayJo
    October 30, 2007

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    This is such a fun set of haiku, Mari! I was laughing all the way through just envisioning each of 'em--Especially those naked ghosts on laundry day, though it makes perfect sense they would be naked without those white sheets hanging on the clothesline!

    I'll be back to check what's in that stash of mine--I'll be back with a traffic jam of witches, naked ghosts and maybe a Count-or-two too!

    Jo


  • freespirit51
    October 30, 2007

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    Incrediable...You did a fantastic job with these Haiku's. I think I really enjoy the last haiku most myself. Incredibly funny.


  • jcat gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    Oh these are very funny indeed!! Thank you for the great little chuckle!


  • Miss Kristy
    October 30, 2007

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    AMAZING

    I tried to make a poem for halloween... not as GREAT as yours!!!

    Very dark, funny, and creative!!
    x x x


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    October 30, 2007

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    haiku boo!

    Is it Belgian tradition that people stand around in the laundromat naked?

    These three are great! The image of the witches is hilarious, I figure witches must have their own air traffic controllers, lol.

    The halloween party ain't over until the vampire crumbles, sorry, a take on the saying, "The opera ain't over until the fat lady sing." Yeah, I know, I should just shut up.

    Ms. Mariza G. G (if that is your name) these are wonderful, witty, and filled with the spirit of the season...and the last two are even Yemish in tone.

    Happy Halloween Pumpkin!


  • leander Moderators member
    October 30, 2007
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    I like the naked ghosts
    Actually, it triggered my mind and I can hear myself thinking now (at least, I can hear the rusty sounds echoing up there)

    Would we really see naked ghosts? as I guess you're pointing at the white linen - cloth - tablething kinda ghosts who float around and such

    aaah great thank you for another question where I'll never found an answer for

    lol


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