busy night
witches and brooms
sky jam
naked ghosts
after Halloween party
laundry day
Halloween party
sun catches late Count
ashes all over
busy night
witches and brooms
sky jam
naked ghosts
after Halloween party
laundry day
Halloween party
sun catches late Count
ashes all over
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Hoodwink!!
What a fantastic creation of some perfect haiku, I wish I could write them with this kind of image. Well done on a fine piece again dear poet.
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I have good memories of this poem. We had some silly laughs while you were writing this one. It's those bats, who wouldn't find those funny?
"Late Count" That's still worthy of the highest "Yemish praise."
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You do these short forms so well. What would Halloween be without a few bare bones running amok?...lol. Excellent work my friend.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Oh My Word!!
I had to chuckle at the last one
Oh my stomach hurts!!
Reminded me of a movie
Love this Sweet Soul!
You are so darn Creative~~Brilliant
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Best wishes to You in all You do my Friend
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Wow ! Mari, these are brilliant lines that capture the essence and fun of Halloween ever so effectively -Absolutely stunning !
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ahahahahah i like it!! ITS a fun haiku!! u should write moooreee!!
hey cn u comment ma poems?? pleasE?? thnxxxx,,,,,,nikki
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TRAFFIC JAM OF WITCHES:
LOTSA NAKED GHOSTS:
AN ASHY COUNT DRACULA HANGING OUT IN THE BACKGROUND OF THIS BACKGROUND WITH A FEW OTHER GHOULS TOO:
Have a wonderful and
Mari!
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Thank you!!! A BOOO to you
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This is such a fun set of haiku, Mari! I was laughing all the way through just envisioning each of 'em--Especially those naked ghosts on laundry day, though it makes perfect sense they would be naked without those white sheets hanging on the clothesline!
I'll be back to check what's in that stash of mine--I'll be back with a traffic jam of witches, naked ghosts and maybe a Count-or-two too!
Jo
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Incrediable...You did a fantastic job with these Haiku's. I think I really enjoy the last haiku most myself. Incredibly funny.
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Oh these are very funny indeed!! Thank you for the great little chuckle!
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AMAZING
I tried to make a poem for halloween... not as GREAT as yours!!!
Very dark, funny, and creative!!
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haiku boo!
Is it Belgian tradition that people stand around in the laundromat naked?
These three are great! The image of the witches is hilarious, I figure witches must have their own air traffic controllers, lol.
The halloween party ain't over until the vampire crumbles, sorry, a take on the saying, "The opera ain't over until the fat lady sing." Yeah, I know, I should just shut up.
Ms. Mariza G. G (if that is your name)
these are wonderful, witty, and filled with the spirit of the season...and the last two are even Yemish in tone. 
Happy Halloween Pumpkin!
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I like the naked ghosts
Actually, it triggered my mind and I can hear myself thinking now (at least, I can hear the rusty sounds echoing up there)
Would we really see naked ghosts?
as I guess you're pointing at the white linen - cloth - tablething kinda ghosts who float around and such
aaah great thank you for another question where I'll never found an answer for 
lol
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Naakt spooken zijn héél schatig
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Kan je die dan werkelijk zien?
of heb je zo'n speciaal x-ray brilletje gekocht
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Ja, ik zal kijken onder je kleren lol
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woman types haiku--
daughter screams,
"where's my halloween candy?"
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kel druzen da prague el je nessen gruben da?
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Ik weet het niet
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Ik draag een ijzeren onderbroek je zal niet veel te zien krijgen lol
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